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I knew her, just as well,
I’d known her countless times before:
brushing past me in the crowd -
just ahead of me in line at the store -
blushing at the Circle K, picking change off of the floor;
I’d known her once in high school, just briefly in the hall
she was them, she was they -
she was no one at all

She was everyone to someone who wasn’t me;
just a muse, just a picture - visual debris

She was starlight through an hourglass at the foot of my bed,
painting rose gardens with verbs on the inside of my head -
coffee shops, cough drops, highway cops and roadside stops
a literary stream of consciousness and
a cherry on top

She was just a face within a frame:
just a muse - just a picture and a name;
never met her, never knew her,
always loved her, just the same.
©2008-2009 ~RenderedHelpless
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Author's Comments

I am sorry I posted this early, I won't be online for the next day or so.

Happy birthday to ~nuxxmadness
This ones for you.

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Holy shit! :heart: x Infinite = .5 of how much I like this.
My favorite thing of yours yet by far.

--
You've been through all of
F. Scott Fitzgerald's books
You're very well read
It's well known-Bob Dylan
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It rhymes very well and has a very nice flow. Its also really true of some people you meet.

"just a muse - just a picture and a name;
never met her, never knew her,
always loved her, just the same."

Favourite lines. :+fav:

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And hours pass, and hours pass, yeah, yeah...
:iconrenderedhelpless:
Wow, thank you.
really.

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconrenderedhelpless:
I did rather enjoy how it closed itself that way. Thank you.

--
I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconzoklar:
You're Welcome. And Happy Birthday to nuxxmadness.

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And hours pass, and hours pass, yeah, yeah...
:iconnuxxmadness:
I adore, adore, adore you. This is by far, the greatest thing about today. :heart: :kiss:

--
"...I'm gonna love you till the heavens stop the rain, I'm gonna love you till the stars fall from the sky for you and I." - Jim Morrison
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this is stunning, a beautiful tribute to a truly beautiful woman; inside and out.

--
It's easier to pull the trigger than play guitar

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:iconrenderedhelpless:
Well, I am glad you enjoy it. Let it never be said that my propensity for spewing words was not in some way useful.

--
I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconrenderedhelpless:
Why thank you.
She certainly does have her charms, it would seem.

--
I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....

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