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We speak s
                 l an
                       t  e d
in rhythmic slurrss and stu tt ere d   syl-ables
like the natives of some fabled isle
devoid of inhibition;

Our words s
               l
 and     collide
               d
               e
delighted to have found
some common ground

but you don't fool me -
sharpening your bruised ego on my
diminished capacity.
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Dig the format, some don't realize what it can do to a poem. In this case it makes it confusing, which is perfect, I had to read it a second time. Gosh, I love words, this is beautiful..the meaning, the power, sometime I think I'm too in love with words to see the imperfection, but I think I am. Why am I rambling?

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:bug: My Poetry is awkward, and slightly damaged. :halfliquid:
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I really like how you organzied this grafically

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{Caught the tears with a paint brush and pen}
:iconrenderedhelpless:
Thank you.

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconthat70show4:
My pleasure

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{Caught the tears with a paint brush and pen}

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