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Stand back
arms reach is a dangerous place
           for me
I have these hands you see and they're always
           reaching out

You should really
            stand back
I've got a violent heart you see, always
            chained down
just waiting for someone to wrong me

Please, I need you to
            stand back
I have a sharp tongue that I
            can't hold
and you're the last one I want to
            cut down
©2008-2009 ~RenderedHelpless
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:iconwhydoidothiseveryday:
i like how off handed it is
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You can't always get what you want.
:iconcrushingly-close:
I'm right there with you.
Amazing, as always.

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Reality is a window, too high up to close, and too sharp to slip through without loosing a life of two.
:iconpeacejunkie:
so amazing
its really mind boggling

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Look in the mirror and tell me with a straight face that you have any idea who the hell the person looking back at you is. Then you can critique my actions.
:iconrenderedhelpless:
Off-handed? What do you mean?

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconrenderedhelpless:
Oh, wow. Thank you.

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconlamia-of-the-ruin:
i love it. every fragment, every word.
:iconrenderedhelpless:
I'm still not sure if I like it or not. It's not like me at all; not my style.
Thank you though.

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconlamia-of-the-ruin:
it still came from your fingertips, and you already know you're a talented writer, like it or not. you're quite welcome.
:iconwhydoidothiseveryday:
like when you say 'you see' it's conversational
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You can't always get what you want.

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